Chapter 3 Posted

 Hello again! Just wanted to make a quick post about chapter 3 being posted! This chapter will be a little shorter than usual, around a 1000 less words. But I think I ended it at a good point, any more or less would not satisfy me.

Fight scenes are always interesting to me. You have to reach a balance between scenery and action, otherwise a reader may get bored or overwhelmed. In addition, you have to make sure whoever is fighting, is doing so in a way that makes sense. Subaru isn’t a fighter so he has to fight dirty and with his head. Hopefully I hit both that balance and the right characterization but who can say. At the very least, my main hope is the chapter is fun and adds to the anabaru dynamic.

Chapter 4 will be posted next week. Whether chapter 5 will be posted in the same week is up for debate, depends on how I feel the development is going.

In addition, I’ve allowed anon comments on my blog, so now people can interact even without a Google account. I’ll leave it on until I think it’s annoying or it’s not funny anymore.

Hope yall like the new chapter!

Comments

  1. I like Subaru's new ability, it's a pretty interesting take on the Authority оf greed. Еven better, how did Anna react to it

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  2. Ana is going to be so rich if she manage to squeeze all those juicy ideas from Subaru!

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